All Comments on 'My Sister Katie'

Nice start..keep going. I would love to know what happens next

More please.

What is their history. Why do they find it acceptable. Where do they go from here.

These are things that need to be answered.

But an excellent short that really does leave me wanting more!

Lexie xxx

good story but just too fast paced

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Very early in you share Sarah's emotional attachment too her sister. And the only time you reveal that her sister has any emotions for Sarah is when she crashes into said dressing room. 😊 4🌟's

Hey girl I ability in you. Keep writing, perhaps explore expanding on story. 5🌟's

Short but sweet. Well done for your first. Now give us a follow up on these two lovely ladies. Thanks-Loved it