All Comments on 'Superhero Origin: The Bull'

Liked it

Hope for another chapter

interested, but way too short for my liking...

need more however, as i said, interested

Looking forward to reading part 2

So meany of the new writers can't write . only part of a story , whats up with that ?

Hey guys,

Thanks very much for your feedback on my first submission. I know it wasn't very long. I was testing the waters a bit and wanted to see what the community was like. Seems really positive! I'll put more chapters of "the bull" up.

I also have another hero who is mental in nature so the story's much more cerebral. I hope that doesn't hack off the fans of the bull who is a much more direct hero.

Cheers,

IWishIWas

If there's more written, I hope you can post it up here. If not - write some more. This is good stuff and should be continued. Just sayin'.

these things happen to teenagers, usually the woman agrees to being cum on, this is great funtime when she is 'on' a slow tit fuck followed by giving it her in the mouth then icing those tits, it is really good if she says thankyou after you have cleaned her in the shower.. if not find someone else !!

Really not bad.

I thought it was pretty short, and while I thought you had a premise here that could be explored, I think that an editor might be useful to you.

damn that was a dumb bitch. they will never get a guy or have kids with this dysfunction she have

the guy seems to be nice.

go on with the story

A good idea for a new superhero in the adult entertainment business!