Withdrawing

a person

that thinks about structure, a new writer, ok some of it is bad, but here is the best part, you'll get better. from what i see you are trying to at the beginning of the lines and within the stanzas, you'll get better quickly
good luck
4 for effort

I read all your stories and poems and watched your progress here. Maybe this isn't your best work but it's honest. Truthfully, you worry me. You are going through a sad period of your life but it's only a small piece of it. Don't give up writing. Don't give up loving either even if it hurts. Best wishes.

~Lyn~

Dips and flows

Ups and downs are part of everyone's life. It's never too late to change directions if you can see you're heading in the wrong one.