All Comments on 'Self Bondage Walk'

As much as I liked this story there was a pretty big inconsistency in times first she leaves at 4am then when she starts its 6am then as she gets to her car its dark out. Now let's say it's mid summer where sunset starts at 7pm its not dark till 8-9 so her ordeal lasted 9hours? And she only had about 5 orgasms? (girls got stamina XD) I usually have no problem with these things but that's funny how inconsistent that is. There's also some grammar mistakes but I don't really care about them so long as there not to bad. For future reference the hobo wouldn't care about her so having them ask isn't really nessary here's how I would have frased it

("here's the deal we all fuck you or you can walk home wherever that is" I gently nodded my head as they got to it at least I'm on the pill) or something similar to that other then that a solid story which I enjoyed 8/10 for the story and a 6/10 for the execution keep up the good work

All I can say syntax. Otherwise, amusing.