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by DawnJ

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tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
A VOYEUR AND A LEER-ER

shyness is his fortitude until, TK U MLJ LV NV

greenmountaineergreenmountaineerover 11 years ago

This is good. Most erotic poems posted aren't. I like what you did with the line breaks. It kept me interested in the narrative.

demure101demure101over 11 years ago
what a lovely poem,

Dawnj. It leaves one longing to be on the receiving and of your smile.

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