All Comments on 'The Big Mature Shemale Next Door'

can we get more please?

Seduction with out domination, a new twist! I complement you sir!

I found this story to be one of the best futanari/dickgirl ones I've read here on Lit. I loved the description and the slow, gentle seduction that built up over time. I liked that the story and Barbara were both dominating without being belittling most of all.

I would love to see more with these characters too. Perhaps we could get the story of the niece's visit? Or the more of the world that's kind of been sketched out here with more women like Barbara and men who find that they love them.

The scene with Barbara in a swimsuit with a hard on created a super hot image in my head. But I don't think his first ass fuck was as descriptive or long as it should've been. Really hope you continue this, i'd like him to see Barbara as a replacement mother and for her to see him as a son (except a son she gets to fuck). Thanks for story and am hoping for more, i've wanted you to do one with this theme for a while so thanks again.

loved it from beginning to end, made me want to be warren lol. can't wait for. amazing

This was so hot, mature has always hurt me, and t gurl too, wish i was warren

I think this story is amazing. I love to read more of this story. Warren is definately a T-Girl person.

Being the sub type myself and losing my cherry to a t.v. I realy loved it and found the gentle seduction without force or humiliation superb.

I have loved being fucked ever since and pleasing my partners but would not accept the slavery and humiliation, I do not need love, just the sex and when possible a nice large cock to service.

think this story has legs and look forwards to enjoying more.

would love to see more, especially with the niece. maybe he gets dressed him/herself.

kisses

Bobbi

An amazing story. Very hot and thought provoking. Cannot wait for the next one

I really love the concept here, but I feel like the story was kind of rushed. You could have gone a lot more in depth with the mother issues, which weren't very well explained. Also, both the act of him being kicked out and then seduced on the rebound happened in all of two/three paragraphs when I feel like you could have made the story TEN TIMES more compelling if you spread those out a bit more, in stead of quickly setting him up to get fucked asap.

Looooooooovvvvvvveeeeeeee it. Can't wait for the next part. Hope the Niece is even more well endowned

Great beginning, keep adding chapters.

Would DEFINITELY like to see a sequel!

Just the greatest I've ever read !! Please keep the sequels coming!

I would love to read the next part!

Loved it, you write some hot stories

I wished it were me many times as I read the story... I like the way you led on with everything from drinking you to just tasting your precum to sucking etc

I would love to read a sequel with the Niece in, and what else you come up with, you are my favorite writer.....

Please, don't stop this storyline. I want to read so much more of it. And I loved the cum drinking part, one of my favourite fetishes.

Can't wait to hear about him taking two she cocks

I was hot the whole time. Wish it was me.

I dream of finding a sexy shemale who would have me just like the lil boy in this story. You're such an awesome writer in capturing all the nuances & desires that really do happen. Thank you for a well-written sexy story & always look forward to your sexy hot stories.

I would love t have you making love to me, fucking tight ass multiple times & breeding me with many heavy cum loads

love your stories but especially love this one, cant wait for it to continue. ill be looking for it for a while. :)

You capture a slow seductive submission..mmmm..how nice.

As some other of your stories this needs to get a second part.

I think this says it all: "There were going to be two of them under one roof with him? Warren's legs went weak."

You just HAVE TO write at the very least, a few more chapters, please. Pretty much all your stories are awesome but this one stands above the rest. I just wish I was "warren" & coulld find a sexy loving transexual as he did. LOL, or she found him. :) Please PLEASE P-L-E-A-S-E write more chapters.

more please

i cant stop reading this story!!! i need more. just the though of her niece and her banging him, damn.

Fantastic story...keep them cumming :)

Do all your fans a favor & write a chapter 2 to this story. I've read this story about a dozen times & can very easily see myself as your "warren". :)

This story deserves a lot of chapters...... and I wanna be Warren too......

please contunie dude

I came twice reading this. THANK YOU

seconde chaptre plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Trully 1 of the best stories on here! Love your work! Please write a second chapter to this. Can't wait to find out what the niece is like

will she and her neice get pregnant from warren, and if so, will they become a incest family?

how about barbara and her neice getting each other pregnant?

your story is so sensual, makes me want to fuck them!

when is the next chapter. we would like more dude.

Great story, add a few more chapters.

you must continue this please! Youve got a lot of people interested and its a great story that has ending just begging for more :)

When do your loyal readers get to read Part 2 ??

"It's gonna be my cock next. Don't panic." is one of the sexiest lines I've ever heard

Keep writing.................. more.

Like everyone else, I loved this and am eagerly awaiting part 2 ( and 3).

best ive read plss post part 2 and part 3 plssss!

Please write a sequel!

sequel sequel sequel!!!

Captivating! I had to read it twice it was so enjoyable!

absolutely fantastic.....i am soooooo in need of what u write......it has been quite a long while since u wrote anything.....I hope you are well and life is treating you good. Hope to read more of your delicious cum inducing stories.

got me so wet, great story and plot

Needs a sequel

Excellent story! Truly exciting and wonderfully erotic. I loved all of it. Great editing too!

There's really not more to say. Just a thoroughly hot story.

Thank you for sharing it.

excellent needs a sequel

As someone who has enjoyed the taste of a beautiful She-male cock in his mouth and bottom, I loved it and now wish to experience it again... right now! Where are You???

Where can I find Barbara loved it.

Need to find a teacher like her to fill up my virgin ass with a big shemale cock

next chapter please

love to meet a shemale that would train me with all the same zeal!

MY NAME IS JEFF

I think this might be your best Story so far. I really hope you could write a second chapter to this Story because if there is a Story that deserves a second chapter its this one.

yes i too become a sissy girl bitch to a she-male it happen one night i gave her a ride in my cab she had on a black dress and fish net nylons as she sat in my cab i now could see her see thought white blouse and a black lace bra i ask her were she want to go she said coffee first then home i said yes miss that when she told me you now i am a man in women clothes i told her yes i know but you look nice in that we got the coffee and drove out to her place it was a way out i pull into the driveway and stop the car she ask if i was in a hurry to get back i said no as i grab my coffee i saw her dress was up a bit she did not move but left it there as i got my coffee my hand hand touch her nylons they were soft as i went to remove my hand she stop me that when i told her your nylons are nice and i love them then she look at me and ask have i ever wear women thing i told her yes i wear panties at home and some time out side are you wearing panties now yes miss i like to see them come lets go in the house we did after we were in take your pants off i did as told now just in panties you have nice panties on you want to see my she ask yes miss i told her and that when i saw her big cock she look at me and said well you like what you see yes i put my hand out to touch her cock she came a little close then i was on my knees and her cock in my mouth she told me i knew you like to suck cock one night i saw you in your car sucking a man cock and you had on a tan bra now bitch you will be my bitch i told her yes and now i am her sissy bitch house slave and i will be her girly toy my ass now belong to her

Sequel please i need a sequel

a twist of power and submission. You tell these stories so well.

I'm sure I've read this particular story 3-4 times over the past few years. Is there any chance that you could write an encounter that includes the niece?

Whether yes or no, please keep writing. You've got a good style, and have the topic down quite well.

Please give us a sequel

damn! Your stories got horny, then more so, finally made me stroke my cock until it exploded! I'd love to get 'Tutored' by her! This was an awesome turn on!

I didn't like the direction you took the story, the mother throwing out her son. that's fucked up.

Too much of the story was predictable.

It needed some twists and turns.

Where's the sequel? Will he get fucked by the niece too?

Well written and extremely titillating; it is my humble opinion that the author should either serialize this work, or tell stories with similar process and motifs but featuring different characters.

Please note, this is NOT an expression of discontent with what we have already: kudos, SugarandSalt, all the way around :)

The story really made me keep reading. Would love to see a continuation to hearing about the niece moving in.

The good news is this is probably one of the absolute best in this genre.

Should you produce more entries--- You "have" to follow this style more.

A continuation-- A different scenario with a different setting in a completely different story-- Either or.

The bad news is you're one of the absolute few who not only produces these types of stories-- But keeps the dialogue within the realm of feminine reason (they're "she"males after all; No need to play them off as mere men with boobs).

More.

Please?

Did anyone suggest that yet?

Because more.

Please give us more.......

I have to say from all your stories this has to be the best 1 in my opinion and as I look down the list of comments quite a lot of people seem to agree. From the first moments in the pool to the actual sex at the end the story is super hot. I Love the way she has him drink the Girlcum out of the Glass and I Loved the Blowjob scene too.

I would Love to read how the rest of Warren's Summer went :P

Please, Please Listen to your Loyal fans and write a sequel to this Story!!!

shemale is incredibly offensive. she is a trans woman, not a shemale.

good story tho.

need more

While I thoroughly enjoyed the seduction of Warren, I couldn't help but think that I would have preferred my nectar directly from the source. So, I understand why Barbara had to approach him differently, as she probably did other conquests. When a college sophomore, a college professor groomed me by tossing my salad while worshiping my body orally. His tongue working its magic against my virgin rosebud was both thrilling and exciting. It was so intense that I couldn't distinguish it from his meaty nine inch cock as he attempted to deflower me. In a state of euphoria, I didn't know whether it was his tongue or his penis driving into me for several seconds or minutes. Nonetheless, I resisted his invasion when the euphoria subsided and I could focus clearly on what was happening. Secretly, I had fantasized about giving up my anal virginity from my very first homosexual encounter with a high school teacher three years earlier. Unlike Warren, I chickened out from fear. Fear that I would become addicted to it, and fear that he would rip me apart with the monster between his legs. Things may have turned out differently if he had approached me like Barbara did Warren. When Warren entered her life, she was wise and mature -- as was my high school teacher. They both seduced with confident assurance, while creating an atmosphere of comfort and safety.

I want ts Barbara. write more

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What a dream to be collared by her, love it to have been me.

its been way to long, you should continue this story, i wanna see what happens when her niece cuts to visit!!!! please continue the story

post next chapter

Great story. Please add a chapter soon.

That means I'm ok with it. I had precum on my cargo pants and had to change my underwear and my pants. I'm considering wearing panty liners in my own panties. I don't know if I want to be Barbara or the boy. But either way I liked the story. And I am going to read it again. I can't remember his name. Ok. I want to say more but I have something to do. with my nipples while I read it over again because I could go hands free while I read and play with my nipples. Thank you.

Hawt

God I enjoyed this, wish I would have a Barbara or anyone's monster cock inside my tight ass. Loved it. Please, someone Fuck my ass. Ahhhh

Great read! Would love to see more with this story line. Being spit-roasted by Barb and the niece would be super hot!

I got so horny reading your story I had to jack-off while fingering my pussy. Would love to hear how this ends up. Sounds as though his end is going to be up more than down.

when will you post the next chapter wioth Barbara's niece ?

Come on pls we need to know rest of the story

That can't be the end of the story,that is only the beginning....Isure am curious

how it would continue,real curious....mmmmm

Great story,reminds me of one I meet years back.She was so hot and what a cock on her.Spent many hours of us sucking and fucking each other.

Please continue this story? I really want a sequel.

Congratulations!!!

We need a sequel!!!!!

mmm

Please write a sequel to this awesome story

Wonderfully writtern keep writing

Wow that was super super hot wish it was me getting my straight virgin ass fucked and owned!!!