by Loansum
This poem is very effective in addressing the needs of the submissive and (dominant) readers.
did you really grind it in
by reading it to her twice
i did like the way you carefully avoided the squirm/sperm rhyme
that was the high point
i didn't vote
I think this does an amazing job of describing her need to submit while alluding to her conflict when she gives in to those needs. It is also very erotic too. I would love to get a crack at this Fuck Thing.
You did it, i didn't think You would post this here, i thought this was private between the two of us!!!!!!
I don't need your permission, do I? You know that when I posted this you were incredibly aroused and ashamed. You still are. But that's exactly what you crave, Fuck Thing.
Do not read much of the poems on Lit. But will have to change that. Really enjoyed this one. Keep up the good work