All Comments on 'Fuck Thing'

by Loansum

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oneiriaoneiriaover 11 years ago
Commanding

This poem is very effective in addressing the needs of the submissive and (dominant) readers.

twelveoonetwelveooneover 11 years ago
and then what happened

did you really grind it in

by reading it to her twice

i did like the way you carefully avoided the squirm/sperm rhyme

that was the high point

i didn't vote

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Well Done

I think this does an amazing job of describing her need to submit while alluding to her conflict when she gives in to those needs. It is also very erotic too. I would love to get a crack at this Fuck Thing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
blushing

You did it, i didn't think You would post this here, i thought this was private between the two of us!!!!!!

LoansumLoansumover 11 years agoAuthor
Yes I did

I don't need your permission, do I? You know that when I posted this you were incredibly aroused and ashamed. You still are. But that's exactly what you crave, Fuck Thing.

tabbymidnitetabbymidniteover 9 years ago
Very nice

Do not read much of the poems on Lit. But will have to change that. Really enjoyed this one. Keep up the good work

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