All Comments on 'Working Overtime'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
I liked it

No soft stuff. Quick and to the point. Would like to see a continuation. Maybe his new boss????

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Fun, but he should have taken pictures. Plus when she does come back he can have fun with her milk ladden tits.

klosetp3rvklosetp3rvover 11 years ago
I liked it

I liked your first story, and I liked your second story. I just hope we don't have to wait another year for your third.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
no

No tits .sucking a love it. And next sty hi can suking them to ????

Leigh_BarrowsLeigh_Barrowsover 10 years ago
Loving all your stories..

Your stories are so hot! Wish they were longer or there were more.. really enjoying reading them, this whole forced impregnantion theme makes me so horny!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

What a poor fallacy,this extract lacks credibility.It is easy to recognise if someone had used you especially the cum in cunt would ooze out and obviously the answer will be known.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Rape?

That's rape, and about five to ten for it too.

sweetvix92sweetvix92over 8 years ago
Yum!

Can't get enough!

More stories!!!

cowbullscowbullsalmost 6 years ago
too short

This story has a couple of issues and begs for a second chapter.

1. No matter how out of it she was during the intercourse, she is going to notice being full of sperm.

2. I suggest you rewrite this chapter and have the guy take a bunch of pictures so he can blackmail her into having sex with him regularly.

3. Also, a young guy is not going to just cum in her one time. Realistically he would cum 3 or so times so my guess is he cums in her mouth and fucks her in a couple of positions.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This really needs to be longer. There is no way a guy would get her pregnant after he cums once. It should have depth of what happened to get to this point. He should have taken some photos. Please make more chapters of this

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Fucked girl friends mom called her cock tease ripped her dress open off her grabbed her bra spun her around undid it pushed her to floor put on her back she had extra large dark nipples ripped her thong off nice thick hairy cunt took my shorts briefs off got on top of her spread legs rammed into her hairy cunt screamed too big raised her legs pound in her hard and deep until her body shook and I unloaded in her cunt she yelled at me bastard i might be pregnate now told her good you now belong to me and your daughter knocked her up night before told be doing alot of threesome between us then grabbed her hair forced my cock in her mouth told suck it whore then shoved down her throat came she fought get her breath now us three fuck every night doing threesome

MtRseMan99MtRseMan992 months ago

Read this before and it's still good.

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