All Comments on 'Meeting a Stranger'

by SluttyRachel

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Very nice. Keep going, this is so delicious. Nyadgunman@gmail.com

LibrandesireLibrandesireover 11 years ago
Good story.

I sense a greater level of arousal and passion than is directly communicated through the story. I enjoyed it but it might have been much more erotic if it was written in the first person or if there was more dialogue between characters. Nevertheless, it is very good first effort. I look forward to reading more stories from you.

love_er_her_waylove_er_her_wayover 11 years ago

you really must write more that is entirely too short for a story that obviously has so much more to it. this is actually a good read, I see too many poorly written stories that just drag on to accept such a well written one to be a single page.

AverygoodlayAverygoodlayover 11 years ago
Too Short

Too short and like many writers on here don't have a clue where the Hymen is located, shoving three fingers into her Virgina would have already torn through the Hymen.

johnr9911johnr9911over 11 years ago
Great story

Nice intimacy and action !!

rory935stephrory935stephover 11 years ago
yessss

keep going! write more

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
I see, we have Averygoodlay giving us gynecology lession again!

Perhaps that old fart should write a submission on the subject then all new writers would be properly indoctrinated on the subject matter.

jamesoffljamesofflover 8 years ago

more to come i hope a good start keep on going with this story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Dam

Left us hanging. I know what I'm thinking butt.....

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