Creative, erotic piece of writing that would have stood out on its own regardless. Your voice became a wonderful frame for the story. One suggestion: Slow down a little. Writing this good should be savored. Thanks for an awesome reading!
VERY good....incredible writing and your voice complements it perfectly....not to mention your bio here and on tumblr...anxiously awaits to hear more of you...
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Anonymous10/11/12
BigLoard4U
Very Erotic Voice....mmmmmmmm. You made me Cum just listening to your voice as I closed my eyes. I would love to hear more from you. I can only imagine what's in that sexy mind of yours to be shared with the rest of us. Just slow down when you record. Please share more of your Fantasies with us.
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Anonymous10/20/12
Very sexy
That was really sexy..Looking forward to hear from you soon!
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Anonymous10/31/12
Sexy and Hot
Loved your voice but you need to slow down. Would love to hear more from you.
English
You are amazing!!!
This has to be the most amazing first contribution in the history of Literotica!
You are an instant Hall of Famer!
Please keep up the great work. I hope this is the first of many.
Amazing voice
You have such a perfect voice for this. Hope to hear more from you.
That was terrific!
Creative, erotic piece of writing that would have stood out on its own regardless. Your voice became a wonderful frame for the story. One suggestion: Slow down a little. Writing this good should be savored. Thanks for an awesome reading!
very...
VERY good....incredible writing and your voice complements it perfectly....not to mention your bio here and on tumblr...anxiously awaits to hear more of you...
BigLoard4U
Very Erotic Voice....mmmmmmmm. You made me Cum just listening to your voice as I closed my eyes. I would love to hear more from you. I can only imagine what's in that sexy mind of yours to be shared with the rest of us. Just slow down when you record. Please share more of your Fantasies with us.
Very sexy
That was really sexy..Looking forward to hear from you soon!
Sexy and Hot
Loved your voice but you need to slow down. Would love to hear more from you.
Great story...your voice is wonderful.
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