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All Comments on 'Secret in the Secret Ch. 05-06'

by roftlheory

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debbie2freedebbie2freeover 11 years ago
too short

Please do longer chapters. More so as this was 2? and barely a page. Still don't get why this is scifi but love the story line so far

SmCyberSmCyberalmost 9 years ago
Well done

Fantastic storyline really enjoyed it. SmCyber

roftlheoryroftlheoryalmost 9 years agoAuthor

Thanks SmCyber!

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