All Comments on 'The Lust Boat Ch. 12'

The sexy pleasure of surrender is quite delicious. To be teased throughout one's surrender, though, is intensely, incredibly erotic. Then to add the torturous twist of watching your sexy comptetitor experience mind-blowing orgasms (YOUR orgasms, had you won the contest and had therefore been saddled into the sybian) . . . well, that makes for a throbbingly good story.

One particular sentence speaks volumes about the verisimilitude in your writing: "Eva's head was thrown back in ecstasy, then she jackknifed forward as her stomach muscles contracted." Exactly. Perfectly, impeccably, realistically and precisely described, and oh, such a glorious scenario to witness --- unless, as the unfortunate protagonist is experiencing --- you are denied the same pleasures.

May you travel many seas in the Lust Boat and continue to share the inventive diversions that the lucky/unlucky ladies aboard experience!