All Comments on 'At the Door'

Great story!

Typos and cryptic (or just plain shitty excuse for English) description for this crap? Ordinarily, I would have (correctly) surmised this wasn't worth my time. But this was SO shitty, I just had to say SOMETHING!

Amazing story! I would read more from you :) My only complaint...it was too short ;-)

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh, to be that lucky guy!!!

I loved every detailed description. It was very erotic and sensual how you let the passion build, until they were caught up in the primal urgency for one another.

Very sexy.

Yes. Okay. Let me expand on that. Yes, please.

very well done, as the air is charged as one reads this wonderful work.

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I completely enjoyed this well written story. I particularly loved the teasingly undressing scene, wow! I was nice how it ended with the tenderness of love. Thank you for sharing.

It's been a long time since we chatted. Love the story. I can picture you actually doing this. I definitely rate this a full erection!