by onlyinmydreams
...that kissing a smoker is like licking a used ashtray?
...voted 5...
that the first thing Lana does on her next day in work is to strike up, right in front of the nearest camera?
I really liked your story here, but a more creative ending could have given it more punch. How about - one month later, she's caught smoking again and in following through it comes out that it's now become part of her daily or weekly routine? Maybe, now she has to wait in line for her turn? Maybe, some people have now started smoking because they heard about it? (Unintended consequences.) I'm sure you can think of some fun twists to throw in. Good job here!