All Comments on 'Daughter's Love Ch. 02'

by sammican1

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avidreader9445avidreader9445over 11 years ago
Keep going

Of course, in my fantasies, Mom gets drawn in and great fun ensues. Even if that's now what happens, I think you've crafted a plot line that needs to be carried on. I can't wait for another installment.

mopar8818mopar8818over 11 years ago
outstanding!!

such a wonderful follow up to part 1.

you left me hanging to every word and action between the two!!! I can't wait for chapter 3

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
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Commas are your friend. Use them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
daughter love

nice story well written i injoyed it

AverygoodlayAverygoodlayover 11 years ago
Real or Fantasy?

Real or fantasy? Very hot father daughter love, looking forward to reading more.

Read your Bio, You have a very Beautiful Ass and you seem to be a very hot and sexual young lady.

You keep writing and I'll keep reading.

Pictures? Love some! papabearlarry@comcast.net

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
WELLL DONE

This story had everythng needed to keep you excited as well as interested. I would love to hear more stories from you and can't wait to see what happens next. Kuddos to you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
hot tale

Thanks for this hot tale, please keep it going.

imharmless69imharmless69over 11 years ago
Yummy

The slow burn in these two chapters is absolutely delicious, and so indicative of how such a union would truthfully unfold. Two people in this position don't suddenly fall into bed together. No doubt, there's months, if not years, of growing desire. I can't wait to see where this leads, and I hope it continues to be an "affair" - the tension of keeping things from mom, rather than seeing her join the fun right off, will be fantastic.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
hot story

I loved your story. I dont have any daughters. But i have had fun with some of my sons girlfriens. I even got 2 of there virgin pussys. And no he never knew about it. I would love to have some of your pics. And any girls that read this. I know there has to be girls out there who would what an older man be there first. So send pics. samhop42@gmail.com

bgpfatclitbgpfatclitover 11 years ago

i want my clit sucked real hard now

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

my oldest daughter just read this with me and said reminds her of the love making we do together....

QuietForHimQuietForHimover 10 years ago
Very Nice

Can't wait to read more! We loved reading it, my D and me! ;)

Todger65Todger65over 9 years ago
More

WTF, why end it here. Where is part 3. I just worked up to them getting down to it and ....... What a let down.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Dude your whole style of writing is a turn OFF.

EglefinoEglefinoabout 2 years ago

Reading the story and the comments, I think there must be a next chapter.

When a chapter ends, it is exciting in your story and there should actually be a sequel. Also in chapter 2 you end the story with an expectation and then you stop.... that's what negative reactions (I think) mean to say to you.

Your writing is okay, and to tell someone "Anonymous" (so you can't defend yourself) a negative comment is not okay, but some visitors/readers are not from this planet because of their non-respect!

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