All Comments on 'Revenge is Sweet Ch. 01'

would be a long range plan with those 2. TK U MLJ LV NV

...story's with chapters should at least strive for more than a page. liked it but is it worth waiting?

At least he's gonna dodge THAT bullet! Time to move on, dude.

you can also tell your sister to go fuck herself cause she cant be trusted to keep her mouth shut.

Good riddance to sluts like that.

First off, the mistake was not made by Nick, nor has it made it into the plot yet. This and the next two chapters (unless I decide to combine them, which I might) are separated from the rest of the story by a significant leap in time.

Also, this is the first erotic story I've ever submitted so I didn't have a clue how many pages it would be on here, but it was four on my word processor. I'm not sure how I'm supposed to dictate where I foresee the chapters ending, but I ended this one where I thought it best to end. My apologies if you thought it insufficient.

Sneak preview for chapter two: Nick hacks into Jane's computer and finds all of her recorded sexual escapades. Highlights thus far include a "gay" French stud, the professor of a class they shared (Nick's first B, which was alluded to in this chapter), and a five man gangbang...I have more ideas, but I think it better to save them until they are more fully formed. Suffice it to say, however, there will be a great deal more action going forward.

and a good place to end the first chapter. Don't leave this one unfinished.

but when there is skull-duggery in the back ground, little hope is forecast, TK U MLJ LV NV

Seems to be not the woman you want to spend you life with. Let's see what our hero has up his sleeve. I'll continue...

Great story Amorous/Fucker. Like the way the story is presented and Nick comes across as a really decent person who shouldn’t get cucked.

Write your story the way you want it to go and don’t worry about the criticism

Great story Amorous/Fucker. Like the way the story is presented and Nick comes across as a really decent person who shouldn’t get cucked.

Write your story the way you want it to go and don’t worry about the criticism

What a croc of shit, don't waste your time reading the next two parts. all questions raised in part 1 and some in part two are never addressed and it will leave you hanging. These incomplete series should be removed from this site. This person hasn't written anything in many years. I did check before I read these and it states a 3 part series. 1*

why not record them? or knock on the window and say Hi?