All Comments on 'John and Amy'

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jbilovejbiloveover 11 years ago
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I'm eager to read the next chapters.

Remain_in_shadowRemain_in_shadowover 11 years ago
Even though there are three characters

...and later parts of this story may actually had a group involved, her sudden appearance in the last paragraph is not enought to pull this sort out of "Gay Male" into "Group Sex". The whole story is two guys sucking each other. Well done, but seriously. Two people is not a group.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Group with an asterisk

Great read. I didn't mind the group classification, as she did the setting up and because it's clear the men are bi and she's definitely part of the plan.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Im so envious

What a well written tale

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