All Comments on 'Assertive, with Racy Acidity'

This is gorgeous.

The only quibble is the "bone dry" in the final line. I can't imagine there would be anything dry about this..uhm, event.

not the audience for this,

so i would object to

lips, lips, lips, lips, lips

for some strange reason bone dry did not bother me, but here it's not used as the new cliche.

BTW assume you saw the others, I'm mightily impressed, remind me of some other guy i would always tip my hat to

i'll drink to this. its fruity notes sit well on my palate

can be changed with chemistry. TK U MLJ LV NV

Unlike 1201, I liked "lips, lips, lips, lips, lips," given the title, but I agree with Desejo about "bone dry" because of the peaches that follow until a wine connoisseur tells me otherwise.

works for any vintage

thank you!

gooseberries. Makes the reader tingle with sense imagery.

Someone has been reading Tom Stevenson.

Five.