All Comments on 'Two if by Air'

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this poem slides into the reader's heart effortlessly !!

nice slide

nice aside

personally this type are the things i love, short and surprising

Really nice. Skip the sofa had me puzzled, but in a good way. Not sure what you intended but I've made it work in my mind...and i like that it made me think. I love "greening gray".

cum sooner, later or better. TK U MLJ LV NV

that's your fault with the gorgeous night-flight description. clever, the bee/lining and that honey/wax smoothsoothing into one another. very ... malleable!

Everything about this felt wonderfully light and smooth.

Especially like the first three strophes where you make the reader feel the flight.

Five.