All Comments on 'The Book Ch. 01'

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LordGlutLordGlutover 11 years ago

Nice possibilities here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

please continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
i'm hooked

don't stop now!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Except that he wasn't listening.

I can't wait to read his reaction as she drains his sorry ass of his soul.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Not bad, I need more!

This is not bad. I hope that you write more. You have a nice plot going here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

great so far, dont stop

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
great story

Great story! Looking forward to more.

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