by rictam
He should kick the shit out of all four of them when they get to the house, and save his mother from being blackmailed.
NO WORD ABOUT STEVE. NOT TELLING THE KIDS.OR RICK WHAT'S SHE COVERING UP A SLUTS PUSSY, SORRY IT'S BECOMING LESS AND LESS MY KIND OF STORY,OTHERS MAY LIKE IT AND UP TO A POINT SO DID I.ENTER STEVE AND YOU LOST ME .NO MORE TO BE SAID. LAROC OF AGES
Yeah you really screwed up a good story by adding rape and blackmail to it. No matter how much she winds up "enjoying" it.
Nope. Not a fan of this chapter at all. Why doesn't Brendan just take his cousin's cell phone, smash it and pummel the fucking blackmailer!
Now you've gone too far. Forced sexual manipulation should never occur, even in a made up story. No one should be forced to do anything they don't want to do voluntarily.
5 for effort and a good story!!
I do not approve of blackmail in any form. If Brendan and/or Heather do not set Ken straight, than Rick or Stephen should. Ken should be the poster board for abortion on demand.
Yuck. Another chapter ruined. It was all good until they made Brendan eat his own cum.