Not a lot of build up, maybe she could've woken up halfway through or something too? Just to add a plot twist or something.
Still, it did the job.
Agreed, a bit thin on the buildup. Still, good writing!
I found this to be very sexy, I hope she wakes up later with cum on her lips, gets aroused and come finds him in the bedroom.
Or...she could babysit again and he could tie her up after she falls asleep so she wakes up with his mouth on her pussy.
I am so horny now I have to go finger my wet pussy. Thanks for writing.
I liked it but I agree, she should wake up in the middle
The problem is that this is still rape. You should have worked in some sense of consent from her.
I wish the "unconscious blowjob" bullshit myth would die already. YOU'RE FUCKING UNCONSCIOUS! This is especially true if you're unconscious because you've blacked out/passed out due to excessive alcohol or drugs.
So to review, no people do not suck cocks (no sucking, licking, tongue action... NOTHING!) or get into sex when they're unconscious and being sexually assaulted/raped. About the only thing that could happen would be you trigger their gag reflex, they vomit, aspirate that vomit, suffocate and die.
The nicest thing I can say is, cliche'!!
come on wat are we 12? i hope you guys stop the crap about a totally passed out lady giving you a blowjob in her unconcious state. Like that is so not happening the only thing that could happen is them throwing up all over your cock and waking up to see you covered with puke and ur dick standing out. Also, pls try to make ur stories more real its not possible for some one to be fucked while he/she is passed out without waking up in the middle except his dead or in comatose or drugged..
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