All Comments on 'Father Uses Huge Asset Ch. 28'

richard should get screwed. its lust not love.

Richard should finally have something go against him. He needs to know some pain and humiliation also, he has already done enough to his son, time for some payback.

Why are your 'chapters' so short? These would be more seen as paragraphs in other proper stories. Can you just bundle five chapters into one submission?

if my father did this i would have killed him along time ago. There would not be 28 stupid chapters of the worst bs in the erotic business.

Whaaaat, don't listen to comments, all anybody wants when they read Loving Wives stories is anybody cheating to get their comeuppance. Which is not what we are here for...

After 28 chapters it is time for Richard to lose. And also all of his women that he stole from his son. I say give them all an std to teach them a lesson.

mate love reading it.. keep it up for a few more chapters... dont give in its a good read and some hot fun :)

Every dog has its day its keiths turn to win once. But his wife should go too

28 Chapters of Richard's dominance over anyone who crosses his path especially his son. Obviously that comes from somewhere.

Write what you believe feels right. This story is almost a masochistic pleasure. We feel sympathy and pity for Martin yet his father continues to steal from him and never loses. Not everyone is going to love it. Personally I both love and dislike it, but that's its power, evoking such strong feelings.

Ignore the nay sayers, they're always here and always will be.

I think it could go either way and stand up strong. Your stories are different, which is why you're copping the negative comments. Don't let them bring you down.

Try to write what feels right to you. If this is the end of Richard's ride, so be it, send him out either with a crescendo and a ride into the sunset, or with an apocalyptic crash into oblivion, pain and come-uppance.

If the former, he gets the money, all the women and buys an island to raise the kids he has sired apart from Martin who he may manipulate into jail or something.

If the latter, make him impotent, his women leave him and Martin finally finds the right girl.

Either way, can't wait to read it.

Richard should get everything he wants. Waiting for next part on Polly series too.

Of course Richard must win. I want to see him and Lisa humiliate Keith and then go on to humiliate Richard's wife. More and soon, please ....

Ruin Keith and I say that as a woman getting fucked regulary by her husbands nephew and please more wall sex my husbands nephew nails me like this all the time it's so hot

What's the point of this crap? All the chapters are basically the same of the father betraying his son over and over again and never facing any retribution for it. Which at this point the only justified retribution would be for Richards cock to be literally chopped off and him to lose everything!

Kill Keith off he's a wimp

 I'm Karen and what you might call a slut to my husbands nephew. Your Richard and Lisa stories are so hot makes me cream myself it's a fantastic sexy story it's like your writing my husbands nephews life story, my husbands nephew is a real Alpha Male and basted cuckolding my husband but I can't stop shagging him. My husbands nephew is 25.  I cream myself reading about Richard your storys are the best please could you write about my affair with my husbands studly nephew I love your work so much here's some info thanks       

Im a 36 old wife and I've been fucking my husbands 25 year old nephew for 4 years he's such a stud he seduced me, he kept slapping my arse and grabbing my tits when I wore my skintight black leather trousers and red leather crop-top then I gave him a lap dance , this was on my husbands birthday, hubby was drunk out on the floor his nephew followed me up stairs I rubbed my leather ass into his groin then he tore the leather trousers down my arse and ripped the rest of our clothes and fucked me silly in my bed god it was so good such a big cock the bed kept hitting the wall then he fucked me so hard I lost count  we did everything then when I thought it was over he took me in the shower my arse was red from thumping on the wall he then took me back to bed and fucked me till Dawn     Anyway wanted to share my true story with you as yours got me so wet married woman like me need fit young studs to fuck us good I love your work your the best on litrotica I really love your work was wondering if you would write my tale and make me cream I'm not a writer and you really are good but please use these names my names  Karen Chesterfield my husbands Harry Chesterfield and his nephews Edward Cox I'm 5 foot 1 , black hair medium length 32 g breasts very curvy body and my friends tell me I have a arse like Beyoncé Knowles and Kim Kardashian I'm White though. I love leather and spandex and denim as long as it's skin tight and thong bikinis my husband Harry is very rich but he is 5 foot 5 and quite fat and has a very tiny cock o and he is bold we haven't had sex in years , his nephew Edward is 6 foot 5 and totally hot Gorgeous face brown hair very very muscular body totally ripped a tight arse and a fucking huge cock 19 inch a real hunk he wheres black t shirts tight blue denim jeans and black leather jacket he works out a lot like weights and running he's a personal trainer he has a fiancée called Emma White though that didn't stop him from cheating on her and not just with me he's a player and a womaniser like Tommy Campbell I know Edward is fucking Emma's older sister Rosie and her mum Lucy,Edward's mum Kelly has told me he's tried it on with her you know the incest thing mum and son i know Edward has seduced my 18 year old daughter phoebe and is fucking her when he is not fucking me I've watched them because he leaves the door open  anyway please write my tale I love your work its the best and know your the one to write my tale I would love to give you my email address but it's my husbands computer and he checks everything I will write to you again to tell you more such as when me and Edward or Enormous Edward as I like to call him started going jogging together and how I wore tight and tiny White sports bra that showed of my cleavage and tight black skintight spandex running shorts and would make sure I bent over in front of him he slapped my arse a lot and groped it but I groped his big cock in his black spandex running shorts and ran my hands all over his red sport t shirt that was so tight to his pecks and six pack I Jerked Edward off and made my young stud fill his shorts with his hot young cum I also rubbed my spandex covered arse Into his groin this never failed to make him fill his shorts as well after we first fucked we usually go running to fuck out side I still tease him but it not long before he's pulling my spandex shorts down while we grope each other than we fuck like rabbits like when Edward took me against a tree when Simon ran with us ,Simon needed to rest and sat on the grass looking at the view Edward gave my arse a hard slap lead my round the otherside of the tree that was right next to my husband span me round and pulled down my skintight spandex running shorts and took my from behind and mauled my tits in my pink sports bra while he filled me with his baby batter all the while we kissed nastily than he picked me up and slammed me against the oak tree and fucked my brains out with my ass thudding against the bark with my legs wrapped round him as he feasted on my large cleavage jutting out of my sports bra filling my with het after jet of his hot young cum    or the time I played pool with Edward and Harry,Harry left to make some phone calls Edward was shirtless just wearing jeans and I was wearing a very tight very low cut ,short leopard print dress when  I took my shots Edward stared at my arse he would stand behind me pretending to help me but it was so my arse could rub his cock in front of my husband . when my husband went to make his phone calls we kept up the rubbing it was a very hot summers day and it wasn't long before his jeans were off and his shorts and he kicked them away and tore my thong of and took me from behind bent over the pool table I could say more but I have to go please you really are the best writer on litrotica please write my story but please use my name Karen and my husband Harry and his nephew Edward you are the best writer I hope you will write my life story ps I'm not a slut well apart from my husbands nephew Edward he's fucked me in every hole I've never had sex with anyone apart from my husband Harry and that was years ago anyway I hope you will help me thanks ever so much bye babe, I've even sucked on Edwards huge elephant cock while he read your storys he loves them too love Karen ps Edward and me have had many encounters but I wanted to give you something to start with please help me I will send you much more info on are fucking and the other woman Edward's fucking but please write my story lots of love Karen

I'm a big fan of your stories, particularly the Polly Urquart series, and I'm glad to see you wriing again!

I definitely want to see Richard succeed, because his failure would only mean an end to this series, and I am especially interested in seeing you follow through on the his wife's humiliation. Frankly, I prefer women humiliating women, which is why I enjoy the Polly series, but yours are the best cuckold stories I've ever read. Keep up the good work!

Karen, email me if you want a story. Where there is a will there is a way.

Wow! You've got to write Karen's story, acdd. Perhaps use the theme alongside one of Richard's exploits. I want to see more of Richard and his disregard for his son's feelings. How about something more public? As for those who submit negative comments - if acdd's work isn't your thing then don't read it.

Richard should get everything he wants. Keith should die and Richard and Lisa shouldn't give a fuck. The appeal of this story is how evil the main characters are. Take that and run with it!

I was thinking maybe you could do a complete reversal for Richard. It turns out the man we think is Lisa's husband is actually a decoy, her real husband is smarter, more handsome and has a bigger cock than even Richard. They're also gathering evidence of his infidelity so his wife can divorce him and take all the money. Richard is left out in the cold, has to work at a car wash and only gets to fuck gutter prostitutes for the rest of his life. If that's too extreme I can understand but something along those lines. Thanks for the great stories either way.

Hi acdd123 its Karen I hope your getting what I send you I'm sending it to you through your feedback link

Do us a favor and stop wasting bandwidth.

I write about people who inspire me, stunning gorgeous women like Lisa and Sally.

Wow!! I really like that you've aloud fans to determine where this story goes next. Obviously as a long time fan I'd love to see Richard continue to dominate and win. I mean, that's basically his character, he's the king of the studs. But it would also be great to see some kind of revenge on the part of the husband. I think whatever you do will be great, just please keep them cumming ;)

Have Richard wake up to find that he's an ugly fat guy with a stub of a dick goning to jail where a big black man breaks his ass with his dark meat

And after 28 chapters of stuff like this, i believe Richard finally having one loss is due. I'm voting for LisaxKeith

Have Richard get fucked right up his ass by Keith and Lisa turn out to be a man

richard keeps on winning with the farthest cunmshot ever

I like KFC it's finger licking good!!!!!

I think your truest fans want what you want. Richard simply doesn't lose. It's time for the wimp and his mother to both get absolutely humiliated. Sexy people win. This time....really make it hurt.

Very glad to see you back.

Richard and his horse cock need to win.

You write brilliantly. This is my favorite series.

Fantastic story. Got to be richard all the way, poor keith doesn't stand a chance!

Thanks for all your comments and votes. I have received all the personal feedback and am looking forward to writing more stories soon.

Result, the world has spoken and Richard wins.

YES O YES FUCK YES

Richard wins hands down ;)! can't wait to read

Please don't leave a girl hanging, email me back when you can ok.

I have twice.

Absolute mother fucking crap written by a fat gay virgin living in his parents basement

Hey Karen get your arse on jerry springer and tell the world you fucking slut!!!!!!!!

Who the fuck are you talking about?

please, post your next chapter ,i am desperate to read it.

richard gets what he wants

Definetly Richard get it all !

It's finger fucking good