All Comments on 'OTK'

Yes, this story uses the elements of BDSM, but at its core it's an incest story and really belongs there. Those aren't my cup of tea and I would have skipped this one had I known what it was. Of course, putting it in the other category would somewhat telegraph the twist at the end, and you'd probably get a certain number of complaints from readers who didn't see why it was in the incest category if they didn't read all the way to the end...

INCEST COMES IN A LOT OF STYLES. THIS IS JUST ANOTHER, NOT BAD, BUT LEFT A LOT OPEN FOR PART 2. MAYBE 3. GOOD LUCK REMEMBER YOU CAN'T PLEASE EVERYONE.

It is almost if someone cut off the beginning of the story as well as the end. It is just a bit of erotica, written I think by a very young person who did not possess the patience to build a proper story but simply put a masturbation fantasy to paper. Don't give up but please take your time when it comes to story and character development.

He is going to need to teach her that she is his now and I expect for him to keep her well fucked or at least I hope so.

Thanks for the good start.

Oh I liked that little bit of info at the end...WOW!!!!!

VERY EROTIC.