All Comments on 'A Virgin Man...and Experienced Woman'

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KingCuddleKingCuddleover 11 years ago
Try to use more details?

Take a look at "French Virgin" by Sexual Improv.

It has the best use of details I've seen here.

And your dialog, so far, is too one sided.

It's more of a contest. Until the story point is achieved.

But...congrats for getting started!!

BarbaraBarbaraover 11 years ago
Great Femme/Dom written submissions, thus far. Voted a 5*****+

As a geriatric sex kitten myself, from far away NZ, we must welcome you to this fast growing 'Sisterhood' of horny 'BDSM' writers.

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