All Comments on 'The Thirteenth Virgin'

It's a nice read. I found some parts humorous. I also think you should have put months later or epilogue before the last paragraph.Good job.thanks for sharing.

thought it was well written but agree that it should have had an epilogue or something

This is a really cute story.

Very nice beginning, great writing style! Nice title! It's all my fault that I got too scared. I had to stop reading halfway because it was too violent. I'm a softie and I get upset when people are hurt. I admire your work anyway and wish you good luck! You're a really good writer!!!!!!