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Forest of Faunus

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/05/12

UNIQUE

Definitely not the common Halloween story. I liked it

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by LaRascasse10/06/12

Short and packed a punch

This story had a very good feel to it. For a story of its size, it leaves you breathless with with dread. Fear runs deep.

Maybe there will be another chapter to this but, as it stands, good job done.

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by damppanties10/07/12

Loved the deep and dark menace seeping through the story and building up to a an embodied feeling of dread towards the end. Couldn't help but feel this story. Good job!

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by naughtEgirl10/07/12

i would never venture into erotic horror on my own but thanks to the contest/thread i ended up here and Really enjoyed your story. your writing style is beautiful and i'm having a hard time shaking the feeling of dread even though your story was short. excellent work.

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by xelliebabex10/07/12

Thank you

Thank you so much for your comments, and for the votes, they mean to the world to me. In my mind I was thinking of those urban legends and spooky stories told around campfires hence the brevity. Thank you again.
~ellie

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