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by Anonymous

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by Dmitry10/03/12

Sounds

like one of the Kafka's transformation stories. Great job!!! So much pain and pleasure.
5 Stars.

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by Silvermouse10/03/12

Promising

Good concept and vivid descriptions, but the flip-flopping between past tense and present tense was nearly unbearable.

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by Lycandope10/03/12

I do apologize for the tense changes. It was the second story I wrote and the first was 1st person so being new to writing and having written a 1st person story just previous kind of killed it. And it's really hard to go back and change it. After a while I will. Thanks for surviving through it!

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by Bramblethorn10/04/12

I had trouble with the tenses too - fortunately the rest of the story was interesting enough to keep me reading!

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by Anonymous10/05/12

Interesting premise. Different, unique

And I like Victoria's character. Strong willed, intelligent and a strong set of morals that adds to the story. Too many writers subtract our moral compass from their characters thinking that it improves the storyline...and it doesn't.

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by VyresOfTheArt03/30/13

Hmm, very interesting story. Quite frightening too. And the tense flops were mildly annoying, but the story was good. Victoria still had her morals, even as she was changing into a Gorgon. Too many stories just have the humans transforming have absolutely no moral standards, as if transforming just erases all of your built-up morals. Keep on writing. (:

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by Anonymous12/10/13

Loved this so far.

Wondering if there will be a sequel? Probably not. 5/5 solid work.

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by Lycandope12/10/13

There is...

Look for Unchained. Let me know what you think!

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