All Comments on 'Heather's Halloween House Party'

I love your plots and detailed buildups. Brittany's stories always deliver.

The plot in this story is so devious, it make me wonder if it's based on a true story?

Pretty nifty story. Devious, manipulative friend, but hey, a good yarn. Everyone got what they wanted, except Brittany ... or did she?

I love the way she twisted everyone round her little finger and the little digs at men. Completely over the top and unbelievable, but hey it’s a fantasy! The only thing that jarred was manipulating Heather into getting pregnant – that kinda stepped over a line and ended the story on a sour note for me. A very enjoyable read, though.

everything worked out 4 everyone... i hope u win! ur awesome!

Of course it's based upon real life events. Nobody [except for a "reality" show, or a "sitcom"] could make up such gullible people.

But it did hold my attention during my coffee break.