by tiffanymanners
please, write more about "Jess", and Brian, and Olivia then,.......i want some hot sex with Jess and Brian!!!
Could do with a middle. Explaining what happend in the two months since they left the bar, you have a great start and a good end now add the middle?
How about a revenge story for Olivia against Brian where she get Jess back
What do you mean where Olivia gets revenge? Tim was the one who got fucked over. Olivia should be made a slave as well, the careless bitch...
I'd of liked an ending with misss olivia be the mistress and brian as a good friend. This is a weird ending which aint any realistic.