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Witch's Curse: Bitch Becomes a Slut

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/05/12

If the curse ceased at midnight

and her hair reverted from blond to black, wouldn't her tits have reverted to their normal size?
Might she not have noticed that?

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by Anonymous10/05/12

"I looked down and my big tits were gone"

Maybe you should read the story a little closer before you post a stupid comment?

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by Jentvcd10/05/12

Hot Great Story Line !!!

Wishes you could work your witchcraft on me I so would love to be a bimbo slut...

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by ILienBagby10/05/12

I am in wonder

Silkstockinglover has created an ASTONISHING tale!!! GADZOOKS: I am in awe, agog, amazed at the artistry involved in this tale's telling. Bless me, as awestruck, I stay openmouthed in admiration for this awesome, arousing, amusing story that deserves far more points than the mere 5 I was able to give it. Thank you, Silkstockinglover!!!!!!

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by mel_pomene10/05/12

Wondreful!

A really great story - congratulations on such a fine piece of work and all good wishes for the competition. Thank you!

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by Anonymous10/05/12

Loved it!

I am always a sucker for a happy ending with a twist. And a fun curse.

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by SnowflakeSarah10/05/12

Super hot bimbo slut!

Love this story! And you're absolutely right, it could easily have fit any of those categories... Which is probably why I loved it so damn much!! Fuck, yum! :)

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by Anonymous10/05/12

Amazing

I love this story! Keep writing :)

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by Littleprick10/05/12

Not your greatest

It is a good story but I didn't really get into it. In all your stories there is a seduction before the sex and there it's missing. I know it's the point but it bothered me.

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by bighank10010/06/12

nice

great story loved it now back to the other story i hope catching mommy. and thanks for another wonderful story. it had my black cock so hard. i loved all of it.

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by goodmanbez10/06/12

Fine Job 5 star work

Love your writing , and lusty imaginations. Makes me wanna go past the H.S. with a happy meal ....lol ..that was bad

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by Anonymous10/07/12

Hot Story!

Heather was too smug for my liking and I wish she got pounded, but everything else was fucking perfect.

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by Anonymous10/07/12

One of the best in a long time

I really enjoyed this story. It kept me coming back to read it. Will there be more? Maybe a series?

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by Lamia3310/07/12

:-)

hehehe
I liked the twist and the happy ending ... I wonder what will happen to Amber when she tries to assert her dominance - maybe Heather could "spell" her

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by Anonymous10/07/12

Plagiarism

pla·gia·rism/ˈplājəˌrizəm/
Noun:
The practice of taking someone else's work or ideas and passing them off as one's own.

I enjoyed your story immensely, however, I thought something was a little "off" with the idea when I read a story by another author written on this site in 2008 that is very very similar to yours.

Since you're doing this for a contest I only felt it would be fair to make sure all the voters have an opportunity to read the 2008 story by ChrystalWynd and make their own decision before voting on a story without an original idea.

http://www.literotica.com/s/bimbos-and-cuff s

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Rebuttal

Rebuttal

Hi,
Since my integrity is being questioned...I must rebuttal.

First off if you are going to question my integrity leave your name. Second, I just read the story you say I plagiarized and am mortified by such an accusation. Yes, they both have curses...that is like saying ever incest mom-son story has incest. I have read that story and enjoyed it, but to say it is plagiarism is ludicrous.

That said, being that there are a trillion ways to write a story, I assume there are bound to be similarities in plot here and there and everywhere...

Truthfully, I thought this story was very original, compared to many of my works, and was complex as well. I have not went to check the other story, but was the curse similar, the characters, the plot...what made you make such a confirmed theory?

I don't usually get so spirited about criticism on my work (like it or hate it that is your prerogative)....but this really ticked me off.

Lastly, I hope all who read my story go and check this other one mentioned (it is a good story)...and if you agree with the anonymous accusation I will remove mine, but I think you will agree the stories are incredibly different...other than they both have a curse that turns a girl into a bimbo...

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by piedeliciousness10/07/12

Kudos for putting the accusor in their place

You handled that beautifully, well done!

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by Anonymous10/07/12

Plagarism? Uh not at all

I think it's funny that the anonymous commenter provided the definition of plagarism but apparently doesn't actually know what it means. Especially when it comes to literature, even if this author had blatantly ripped off someone else's idea, as long as they wrote a different story then it's still NOT plagarism. Nothing about this story was plagarized from the story the anonymous commenter referenced. There was a kind of similar idea... sort of...

But even if this author got the idea / inspiration for this story from the other story, that doesn't make it plagarism. That's not what plagarism is at ALL. Otherwise no one would be able to write ANYTHING ever.

I thought you did a great job, love the schaudenfreude and the fact that the main character was tricked into thinking she would remain like that. I also like that she learned a lesson through her experience and came out of it a better person and that you threw in a little dash of romance at the end. Good luck with the contest! This is one of my favorite entries so far.

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by Jim4444410/07/12

Fun story

Must be a good story if you can get the anonymous wack jobs into a tizzy. I gave you a five.

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by Anonymous10/07/12

Hey anon? The one with the dictionary?

Ummm...you forgot to cite your source? You know, the reference book you took the phoenetic spelling and definition from? I believe the word for that is...ummm...PLAGIARISM?

Next time, look up douchebag. It will likely better serve you.

-JT

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by wrc26410/08/12

Great story

Wow, a fantastic story. And whoever said this was a copy is "like so full of it". Is that good bimbo talk. This one actually has a story that is fully developed and complete. The other one is simple and vapid of plot. Anyway, great going, hope you win the contest.

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by Anonymous10/08/12

WoW

u blowed my mind the story was breath taking!!!! u r good with this story it went smoothly in, not to complain.... the beginning was flowing in it diddnt grab me as much. but it was just one problem the rest was perfect you should win the contest

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by Anonymous10/09/12

Personal Responsibility

I have previously negatively commented on some of your stories because you permitted your characters to forego their lives as they knew it with little or no thought their spouses, children, families, or jobs for the various fetishes and pleasures provided in the story lines. You never dealt with the reprecussions of these decisions despite being a fine and creative writer. In this story you did, both for Kim's attitude towards the less privileged world and with regard to putting a limitation on her "curse". For that I applaud you. It made for a better read.

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by ScioNescio10/13/12

Excellent

I liked the fact that Kimmy was only taken advantage of by her boyfriend, her best friend, and a few people with whom she was especially cruel. No complete strangers or disturbing miscreants. And the twist at the end was worthy of Steven Moffat.

Makes me wonder how her next encounter with Amber is going to go.

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by Anonymous10/18/12

Welcomed Change

Wonderful story. As always, you write wonderfully in each of your works, but this one had something more to it. As someone else had mentioned, most stories forget the after effects of such acts. Someone strolls in, and soon the main character's life is thrown into chaos. Jobs lost, relationships ruined. While this isn't always a bad thing, it's somewhat refreshing to read a story like this with what could almost pass as a moral behind it.

Was her life 'destroyed?' In a way it was, but by the end she learned something important about herself, whether it lasts or not. And instead of ditching the 'perfect guy' just because she found some new fetish, she dumped some jerk for someone that would actually take care of her.

Again, very well done. Looking forward to more, whether continuing this story or something else.

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by The_Crazy_One10/22/12

This is good work, and I like how it show the effects of such a event. Keep up the great work.

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by sleeplessgurl10/31/12

Great story premise

I really enjoyed this. It was different from the usual Halloween fare. Great premise and story with a satisfying conclusion. Well done.

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by Bri_Nicole11/16/12

Great Story

As always a marvelous story!

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by Jogrinde03/09/13

The nerds one yay!!

Great story!!

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by Anonymous06/02/13

Masterful as always!

Just another great story by you. It was interesting and a life lesson taught in an unusual way, a bit of clarity amid all the chaos. Looking forward to enjoying more of your writing submissions.

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by mo_from_tn07/14/13

Great read !!!

Now that was a great story. very good.

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by shaun276908/20/13

fantastic

I couldn't put my phone down had to read it all at once & after ;-) WOW what an explosion!
I'd love to read about heather treating a guy to her curse :-P
Thanks for an awesome read

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by bluemoonstruck08/29/13

Fantastic Story

Another incredible story. U R my favorite writer. The best in the business.

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by Anonymous11/12/13

B

Heather and her friends are no better then Kim and her friends. In a depraved way they are worse

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by Anonymous12/04/13

sequel

sequel needed :)
maybe heather is also cursed

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by VisualPerv12/14/13

Hot!

Wow! That was an unusual storyline for Lit. And hotter than a blowtorch. Very, very well done!

Just how wet did you get while crafting this one?

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by Anonymous12/18/13

Incredible

You have out done urself , this ranks in my top five favourite stories , it left me speechless , I mean its like you were born to write , best in the business indeed

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by Anonymous01/01/14

would love to read a sequel . does amber have another go with kim

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by runnerman102/16/14

That was HOT!!!

I loved reading this one, it took a different approach to the whole mc / nc theme. The curse isn't life-long just life altering, and for the most part it's a good alteration. I love seeing a character grow in a crazy situation like this.

That said, i would pay to see a sequel to this one, i understand this isn't your normal theme but it was AWESOME!
If I could write i would ask to try my hand at it.

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by Anonymous03/04/14

sequel

sequel PLEASE! one of the best stories on here!

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