Another good chapter. Really like the spirit that Brynna shows. She is not wilfully disobedient and uses her mind to her advantage. So often stories are filled with week women who make stupid decisions I do hope she keeps that strength . Interesting that he was expecting her, obviously lots of plot to come. Really enjoyed the read and I definitely think this and the previous chapter comes under non c. Thank you.
More please! Another great chapter and posted so quickly!
I can't wait for the next chapter, hopefully it will come soon as well? :-)
I love her wit and admire her personal strength. Please don't turn her into an easily dominated, helpless character (which I see here virtually all the time). I can't wait for the future chapters and your quickly becoming one of my favorite authors on this site. Keep up the amazing work, your making a lot of people VERY happy :) xxx
Finally a character that embodies more than being wimpy and submissive. It's a great play on both main characters. The strength of their wills. It helps balance out his strong and controling personality that she's not having it. If she was wimpy and him overly controlling it would just piss me off. It's great to see another story from you as well. I love your series of claiming an ally. Will be waiting for the next installment :)
Looking forward to your next installment!
So far, so good. You do really well with maintaining plot consistency and continuity. I like the way you are developing Brynna. Though your Claiming an Ally story was a little too consensual for my non-con tastes, I find that your development of strong female characters is great enough for the story to be quite enjoyable. Character development and plot continuity is what put you on my favorite authors list. :)
I do think that this should probably stay in the non-con section just because it has enough elements of reluctance that new readers who see it listed in another section might not be too pleased to have been misled by clicking on it. I know for myself that there is nothing worse than clicking on a story listed in Romance that turns out to have a fetish element that I have an aversion to read about. It's too bad that Literotica does not allow for multiple section listings or at the very list allow readers to see the tags for the story before clicking on it.
Just a side question that I hope you answer in your next chapter's author's notes: Do you have a posting schedule for this story or do you anticipate having lengthy gaps in postings? I am committed to reading this story to it's conclusion, though I must admit that I would prefer to wait if you anticipate not being able to complete it without pause. I often find myself forgetting in between chapters and have to re-read to re-catch myself up. The time between chapter 1 and 2 in this story was just right to not have to do that.
You really have a great flare for writing, I have read all you have written, and each story is filled with luminous description, characters whome, in such a short span of time, draw you in and make you think. I wasnt sure at the beginning about how I would feel about the peice, but I always finish what I have reading. And I loved this. I know you said this was to be a two part series, but can we encourage you to continue? I believe this is the kind of story and plot that could truly be brought to fruition in a slow burn.
I hope you will consider more!
Really enjoyed this. Looking forward to reading the rest. Your writing is impressive.
I do hope, like one other commented, that there won't be any horribly long gaps to wait between chapters. I get excited to read more once I am caught up in a story like have been in all of your submissions so far.
I also agree that this should stay in non-con. I love the way that Brynna is unwilling to submit to Malik. It really disappoints me to start reading a non-con story only to find the female submitting quickly and usually by the author *willingly* to her tormentor. That to me takes it right out of this category. You are right on point, though. And of course I love that Malik is unwavering still.
I only hope she gets revenge
Loved it! Especially Bryanna's conflicting feelings: her need to submit, in order to fulfill her father's debt, versus her need for freedom. IDK, but I am pretty sure Malik has OCD or something similar. Seriously.
I loved! The passive aggressiveness of the MC. Also... shit naked and in a tower. That is so hot.
What a dick! >^
What a douchenozzle.
This story is very addicting. I have to force myself to stop reading to sleep. Will continue tomorrow!
Looking forward to more. You've created quite the atmosphere. I was a little confused as to Ann/Beth. Are they the same person?
Liking it, well done. He seems seriously OCD :), and it was funny that he didn't have a solution to her overuse of "my lord" :). Wondering why he has an Asian name..? Liking Brynna's sassyness a lot. Can't wait to read more.
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