All Comments on 'Hawthorn Manor'

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FLacLoverFLacLoverover 11 years ago
Chlorophyll?

Not a bad piece of Eroticism, but there is a howler of an error toward the beginning: He should have used Chloroform to subdue his victims, Chorophyll is the is the chemical compound that colours plants green, and helps plants produce Oxygen.

Oh, well.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great

Awesome read. I'm not superstitious at all and I'll admit some parts freaked me out. Was definitely hoping Tracy and Felicia would hook up though

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

what the fuck, that is some messed up shit!

michammichamabout 8 years ago
Great!

I loved the story, it kept you on your toes... But it ended so suddenly, I feel like you couldn't think of an ending.

Malice11Malice11over 7 years ago

I adored this, i was glued to my screen. It's just a shame about the ending, felt rather anticlimactic, personally I'd rather not have a happy ending or one that comes about so suddenly. The rest however, fantastic!!

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