All Comments on 'Mei Meets a Monster Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Still weak writing

Please learn to use commas more often, quotations when characters are speaking and "grow up" your writing style - you use the word "pussy" like it's going out of style then use the word "boobies". Really? Also, women don't climax as easily as you'd like to imagine or most women wouldn't spend their entire sexual lives faking it.

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