All Comments on 'A Tangled Web Ch. 03'

Great start...You left me hanging with 2, 3 or even 4 possible stories..

Charla, Sally, Jennie, and her little sister....

throw the bitch out. she dumped him for a guy that kept pushing with the just friends line so she didnt love him enough to stay loyal. i say throw the bitch out into the street and tell her not to come back.

young people, no serious committments to anyone, a little nookie wont go astray

wow you sure know how to get me on the hook but please put out a speedy next chapter as this one took so long to get out that I forgot about it and by chance clicked on it

Your heading in the direction of the girl offering a pity fuck??! 75% of all my friends who have had sex with an older woman wouldn't consider it. Men think mainly of two things, money and sex. His step mom controls both, he would not mess that up. At least not until he gets control of his fathers company.!

Aaaagh! Every French gene in my body recoiled upon reading: "Puis-je apporter vous mesdames quelque chose à boire?"

Try instead: "Mesdemoiselles, aimeriez vous quelque chose a boire?"

"Mon ami aime votre beau longs cheveux." <---- so many errors!!

Try: "Mon amie aime bien vos beaux longs cheveux."

Hopefully Alex is mature enough to realizes what he has. If not, I feel sorry for his step mother because she deserves better.