A slow start but well worth the wait .I see that you have left room for a sequel .Please write it .
Another fabulous submission. You write the songs that make the whole world sing, but by whole world I mean literotica readers, songs; erotic fiction, and by sing; beat off.
This story brought back memories of my college days in Wisconsin although I did have better success. Great job!!
Great characters, please continue!
Great job building excitement and great characters. And, hot sex! Lets see the rest!!
My one tiny criticism: I couldn't believe that Troy would use the word "dissuade".
Loved the characters, the build-up, and especially the all important message - sexiness is about confidence and personality!
Excellent story, fantastic balance between character and action
A story filled with erotic images that lead to a wonderful end.
Great story... loved the ending "I'm your girlfriend, stupid." Lol
... wunderful! and really nice ending: "i'm your girlfriend, stupid!" really loved it. wouldn't mid to read more of this or more like this!
A fun romp of a story! Interesting how you set the main character up to pine for one girl only to have his first time with someone else. Nice twist and well done!
I got a bit nervous in the middle when "his" girl hooked up with another. Beautiful ending, thanks for writing!
Your talent for capturing Any Reader is amazing. I will take the time and read it again to relive the joy ... of Reading C B Summers. Your novel WILL Be a treasure worth waiting for. - NellaBare
Another great story. Well done!!!
can't wait for the novel. Loved this story! Keep them cumming please!
Great work of Reality! HOT... yet sweet.
Who else can use "poindexter, gobble, flabbergast and BB gun" in an enjoyable story about young love? Who else crafts the vocabulary of nerdy, inexperienced, hot-to-trot adventurers pushing the envelope into never before imagined emotional possibilities?
Few authors can set the stage and Guide the reader back to such a coming-of-age episode. This special moment in time is complete; anything more would break the spell.
You bring back images many of us can recall with more clarity than we care to admit to close friends. That goes for the jerk imposing on weaker "friend" with a sock on the door knob, the struggling achne-faced nerd watching the "rutting animals" in a dorm room, as well as the two fledgling Lovebirds in their hopefully secluded love nest. Congrats. A True WINNER!
Love all your works, even if I haven't read every one ... YET
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I will love any more there is but do not know what could top this. I got off to your 'sex-geshichte' almost like you watching Briona
Your stories always feel like a fun ride, CB, but this one also had fantastic character development and tenderness too. Great story. Enjoyed it immensely.
That was totally fantastic! I was absorbed in this from front to back and like a good book I couldnt put it down. Thanks
You could actually build on this as they begin their relationship. They could surprise Troy and Briona
Not a bad story... But finding out that Bree was doing that like, RIGHT after her date with Hand, it ruined the rest of the story. Idk, just me and my stupid thoughts.
Otherwise, great stuff. The finalle was good.
That was probably one of the best stories i've read on this site!
It's great because it is both funny, sexy, and even without the sex, a story worth reading. Nice surprise with Briona turning out the way she did. Liked the happy ending too.
What was that thing in the bushes?
Excellent Job !!!
Gotta ask, what was the thing in the bushes?
Sir, you do one hell of a job.
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