by LesterFoxhunt
This story is very arousing. Many possibilities here. e write some more chapters, so we see where things go. Thanks !
I loved it! This story has great potential and I hope to see a sequel soon.
Really 9 1/2 inches why not 10, hell why not a foot. The characters are too perfect and the plot was poorly thought out. Needs lots of work.
9 1/2 inches...9 1/2 inches...9 1/2 inches...Really,Really,Really
think we got it after the first five time you mentioned it,you got a 9 1/2 inch dick,
So let me get this straight, your jerking off in your room at collage haven't cum for a month just about too when get a phone call don't/can't anwser it but can listen to message with a telephone pole sized cock(but stop jerking off drive home)
then when you cum and thats it, its over,just get out of her room
what happened you can only get your 9 1/2 inches up once every 4 weeks
9 1/2 inches! Really? Every guy (well, maybe every guy) fantasizes about having a baseball bat for a cock. I find it such a turn off. Just like I do with huge breasts. Its not realistic. I'm sure I'll hear from the BIG fans. But you couldn't get through the first page without being reminded multiple times he had a 9 1/2" cock.
i agree with the others .. the 9 1/2 inches was a bit much (so to speak haha), as were the DD size tits. otherwise, not a bad story, although there could have been more tenderness and brother/sister love feelings for one another.
i think the sister could have been turned on seeing the bulge in the spandex shorts even if it had been only 6 inches.
If I had a big-titted baby sister naked in my bed like that and I hadn't cum for a month, I'd pump all that sperm deep inside her hot pussy instead of all over her. It would be so hot to know I could very well be getting my own sister pregnant!
I did mine... She just turned 18 when I put my bastard in her belly
Ok 9 1/2 inches we get it. All muscle and solid. Telephone pole dick. More into himself than the girl. It seems like the only reason he fucked the girl is because he couldn't fuck himself. Too bad.
Not a lot to say about this....the other post mentioning narcissism was pretty close.
Boring. Annoying.
you left this story hanging you need to fenish it.ok so i cant spell. LOL
If you have a 9 1/2 cock it would be pretty obvious. You wouldn't need to keep pointing it out. And really, above 7 or 8 inches does it really matter how long it is?
Your obsession with you huge/enormous cock is childish and ruins the story
In your dreams you have 9 1/2" cock... for me that ended the story straight away and so straight to the end to tell you its a load of bollocks plus you been watching too much porn !!
Get real ok, the average size cock today is 6-7"
When you grow up, try again maybe, kk
do another chapter where this time, you stick your dick into her pussy and you keep thrusting into her until you cum, and she makes you not pull out, she doesn't end up pregnant, and you two fuck many more times afterwords, and you both are fully naked too when this happens.
You constantly shifted back and forth between past and present tense. Pick one and stick with it.
What makes you think that working out will make a cock bigger? Damn. Such ignorance should be against the law. I stopped reading right there.