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Vindictive Romance

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/10/12

Love it. Hot!

A great story with real hot action. Will be rereading it!

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by Anonymous10/10/12

pretty good

A pretty good story . Try rereading after you spell check and edit. "Tide to the desk" wrong words can ruin a good story.

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by Anonymous10/10/12

Excellent

The only better ending I could think of for this story is for Suzanne to say that she picked up the frying pan he left behind in the warehouse.

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by Anonymous10/10/12

can you spell?

For goodness' sake find someone to edit your stories. Your ideas are good, but anyone who's half awake will find your mis-spellings and bad grammar a total turn off.

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by 10/10/12

a fantasy all right.

And very unbelievable, but that's OK--it's a fantasy. I was fairly distracted by the use of the wrong word (which often amounted to a spelling error). The story seemed a bit rushed, but fantasies can be like that too. The murder theme isn't a fantasy of mine, so that part kind of ruined it for me. And those police were pretty dumb. This story needs lots of help!

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by tazz31710/11/12

SPUR OF THE MOMENT

and look what happened, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Jim4444410/20/12

An OK story

I can overlook the spelling errors and the wrong words but not the weak ending. The plot had potential but you seemed to rush the ending.

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by Tipson10/26/12

Readers

I wrote the story as a beginning to a variation. Hopefully you will enjoy the others which should justify this one and should be published soon. Regarding spelling...oppps. Can't promise I wont do it again (I would blame auto-correct, but my computer does not do that).

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