All Comments on 'Office Tease'

The word you NEEDED here was 'past'!!

Proof read and check your spelling, grammar and punctuation.

Also, get a good Editor to teach you about story construction. You seemed to be in an almaighty hurry to get this story over and done with!!

Also, I think you meant "shuddered" instead of "shuttered."

To the rude and cowardly people who have nothing more than anonymous carping to give out. You made a few spelling mistakes because the story got you hot and bother - yes? Well, me too. Short, sharp and to the point - have sent you a longer reply to encourage you