All Comments on 'Just One Kiss'

I have never been so moved by a story to the point of commenting. You nailed it! I could picture it, feel it, the passion was unstoppable and you articulated that beautifully!

Thanks, SproutingWallflower. That's kind of you to say! I had a lot of fun writing this one. :)

Sensational story. Could feel the mood as I read it. Another chapter perhaps!

This was a very well written story! =D I loved how playful it was one minute and then the next completely erotic. I loved it. Also, if it ever comes about, I would love to read more about these two.

I hope these two build on something so beautiful, and erotic at the same time.

I haven't visited this site in years and the first story I read was this one. Bravo! Great Job. I really enjoyed it and would definitely like to read more on these two.

Awesome job with the story. Would like another chapter to see if their relationship changes

Oh! I wish I was with my sould mate like that. 25 years and we have only kissed! May be ...one day ...

I love your stories. Please, keep writing.

I love them too

By about the 2nd paragraph I was already hoping for a happy ending. I'm impressed that there was not only erotic sexytimes between them, but an emotional arc as well. Kudos for being able to combine the two.

Gosh, I wish I'd found your stories when I first came on Lit - tho I may not have written after reading your words. You're fabulous! Thanks for a lovely, romantic & hot story!

Stacy

This is very erotic - you have the best storylines.

Oldie but goodie!