by slopoke1012000
you can't even spell your tagline right (sepErates), nobody will read your story.
I gave you one star for sheer laziness.
I read your story and thought it was very good. Most people are not as criticle as the other person that commented.
Please continue to write.
I would have given a 4 but gave it a 5 because of the anonymous idiot's comment. Keep writing and ignore the fools who hate everything.