All Comments on 'Offspring Ch. 034'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Enjoied the story so far

You have left little tidbits all over the place. I think Im in the same universe but I dont know if Im on the same story line in my guess. I look forward to finding out.

Wanderingaimlessly

EdwarusEdwarusover 11 years ago
Woo hoo

Yay your back cant wait for more

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Thanks

Awesome!! Welcome back.

phillipmichael2phillipmichael2over 11 years ago
glad u back

welcome back love ur story I was afraid u would do like so many writers here stort an epic story then quit in the middle hope u finish this

katgoddess1katgoddess1over 11 years ago
Great story

I thoroughly enjoy watching Jack think his way through this whole situation and work to bring Talla's people out of the mold they have been locked into. It's all just a matter of perspective.

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