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My Trick or Your Treat

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by Anonymous

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by curiousk7510/13/12

Nicely done...

Loved it! More please...

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by DarkSolar10/13/12

Didn't see that coming..

Wow! I didn't expect her to be a transgender. You certainly had me fooled. Because how well you laid out the story and the twist in the ending, I will look for more of your work.

DS

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by Anonymous10/13/12

WTF

Written like a 5 year old.

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by Anonymous10/14/12

Love this

I thought I knew how this would go but it was so different! I was shocked! Love it! Trick for sure.

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by Anonymous10/14/12

Wow...

this author has issues... deep, psychological issues.

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by chytown10/15/12

Good Read****

Trick Or Treat only this time the treat gets tricked. Thanks for a different read.

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by Anonymous10/16/12

YOU MOTHERFUCKER!

Now I feel *blech* for getting wood...

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by Anonymous10/16/12

Haha, great story.

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by Anonymous10/17/12

Blerg

Not a fan of 1st person to begin with, tepid writing, revenge twist ending is blase at best, about as erotic as a 2x4. This isn't bashing the ending, the story and writing is just bad.

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by Anonymous10/18/12

Interesting

Different kind of story. You warned us of the twist ending I guess no one listened. I liked the writing, proper grammar for once. Also, got me wet. Good job.

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by Anonymous02/12/13

Dead

You think she can't be found? This whole thing just didn't work. Too unbelievable

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by Overthefalls09/23/13

And that's the link

She called your wife. Find the phone records and you find her. Revenge is a dish best served cold.

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