All Comments on 'My Trick or Your Treat'

Loved it! More please...

Wow! I didn't expect her to be a transgender. You certainly had me fooled. Because how well you laid out the story and the twist in the ending, I will look for more of your work.

DS

Written like a 5 year old.

I thought I knew how this would go but it was so different! I was shocked! Love it! Trick for sure.

this author has issues... deep, psychological issues.

Trick Or Treat only this time the treat gets tricked. Thanks for a different read.

Now I feel *blech* for getting wood...

Haha, great story.

Not a fan of 1st person to begin with, tepid writing, revenge twist ending is blase at best, about as erotic as a 2x4. This isn't bashing the ending, the story and writing is just bad.

Different kind of story. You warned us of the twist ending I guess no one listened. I liked the writing, proper grammar for once. Also, got me wet. Good job.

You think she can't be found? This whole thing just didn't work. Too unbelievable

She called your wife. Find the phone records and you find her. Revenge is a dish best served cold.