Loved it! More please...
Wow! I didn't expect her to be a transgender. You certainly had me fooled. Because how well you laid out the story and the twist in the ending, I will look for more of your work.
Written like a 5 year old.
I thought I knew how this would go but it was so different! I was shocked! Love it! Trick for sure.
this author has issues... deep, psychological issues.
Trick Or Treat only this time the treat gets tricked. Thanks for a different read.
Now I feel *blech* for getting wood...
Haha, great story.
Not a fan of 1st person to begin with, tepid writing, revenge twist ending is blase at best, about as erotic as a 2x4. This isn't bashing the ending, the story and writing is just bad.
Different kind of story. You warned us of the twist ending I guess no one listened. I liked the writing, proper grammar for once. Also, got me wet. Good job.
You think she can't be found? This whole thing just didn't work. Too unbelievable
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