All Comments on 'My Dark Angel Ch. 02'

Wow I love this. Can't wait for the next chapter. Post it soon please

Ethan's attraction to the dark haired man is explained-fleshed out. McCartney's bomb at the end is out of nowhere. Like Ethan.

Loving this story. Love the way Ethan daydreams or talks to himself. Great start PLEASE keep going!

Thank you, it was just a dream! Furthermore, in my mind, Mr. McCartney looks like my type, dark and mysterious. Ethan, I feel you, can't resist that, and he laid out a rather surprising yet doable remark. And love, please make the chapters longer, when it comes to my favorite stories, I'm not patient.

I love this story I love it love it love it please post really soon. I wouldn't mind longer chapters but not if it cost the quality of the story. post really really Really soon please

To be perfectly honest this story is very cliche and predictable.

Your grammar is also appalling -- you should definitely consider getting an editor to check both your grammar and tense.

The character development is sub par and the character interactions are not very believable -- especially in an office environment.

I'm really interested in reading more and seeing where this goes :)

This is getting verrry interesting.

WHAT??...CLASSIC!!lol i love this story

There are just too many errors in this story, it makes it hard to just enjoy it. Also, the lack of character development or backstory hurts what could be a good story. The dialogue between the characters is boring due to lack of emotional context. It is little better than inane chatter.

I'm sorry, you have not captured my interest and I will not be reading any more of your stories.

Too many mistakes in grammar make it hard to read but that could be forgiven if the characters made sense. They don't. Your main character is like Sybil, ugly/beautiful, scared/violent, sexy/virginal????????, suicidal/survivor. Make up your mind. Think about it before you start writing. There is a place for automatic writing, just not here.

More, more, more !!!!