by NickJBella
Nick,
This is quite an adventure you are taking us on. Please keep going.
jesus christ...get on with it.....set up is fine but this is nuts....
Yes, I suppose Kevin is a jellyfish. Nora has told him what to do his entire life and now Ty is in charge.
As for the other anonymous comment regarding length. My chapters may be somewhat short but that is due to the limited time I have to write. Then it has to go through editing and submission. It can take over a week to complete the process. I feel I am wrting a complete story. I am a bit confused at what you want me to get too.
Nick
Don't listen to those who say get on with it. Yes I find the short chapters a little frustrating but if that is the only easy way you can produce them so be it, people can wait till 2 or 3 have been produced it its a real problem for them to read.
However if they mean you are dragging things out then just ignore them you are timing this perfectly there needs to be a build up, to wet our appetite and expectation and you are timing that almost perfectly to my taste. Indeed its pretty fast paced compared to most and any faster would destroy its spur to the imagination. Keep up the good work.
I barely get five sentences into the story and my cock gets a full hardon. Damn this is hot. The sexual tension s incredible.