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Better than Trick or Treating?

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/17/12

CLEVER IDEA

This was a quick sexy read.

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by Ahabscribe10/17/12

Sweet Treat!

Nothing puts a smile on my face like a slightly silly and very sexy incest tale! Well done!

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by nightshadow10/17/12

Rushed!

The beginning and middle were both very good, very solid writing. I was getting a real feel for the characters and their motives. Suddenly, however, it was like a full-on torrent. Everything got rushed and it was over a lot faster than it began. A LOT could have happened in those hours at the party- so much more than was conveyed. It's okay to take your time with a story, you know. Play it out in your head and see where IT can take YOU, not the other way around. Just remember: the more time you spend on a story = more time the story can be enjoyed by your audience.

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by Anonymous10/17/12

Your knowlege of the female anatomy is limited.

Auroras? You mean areolae?

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by Anonymous10/17/12

this seems more of a nonconsensual /tricked the younger into something. by throwing her into the party with know heads up makes it more of a rape set up.

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by Anonymous10/17/12

Turn On

Hot story; however, her brother deserved a good hard spanking for not getting permission before penetrating her.

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by LUSTYWHEELS03/07/13

Awesome story!

I love your stories, I only wish the whole nite had been explained in much more detail. Keep writing your stories are always instant favorites and we will never get enough

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by Anonymous11/13/13

Halloween

Candy is dandy
But sex don't rot your teeth.

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