All Comments on 'Halloween Wish'

by PrincessS85

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TLBurtonTLBurtonover 11 years ago
Lovely!

A very lovely story, and a nice evening read with a glass of wine!

(I believe I can identify with your character's issues with tight clothes, as my pants are now feeling a bit undersized.) thanks! :-D

EesomeBeastieEesomeBeastieover 11 years ago

That sudden end screams that a part two will follow. I hope so. I hope that those who suddenly pay attention to her because of her transformed body get their comeuppance for being so shallow and that she finds someone more deserving of her … but not before she’s sampled the field a good deal more!

Shadowforce1Shadowforce1over 11 years ago
Very Nice

I am hoping there is more to this. Judging from the end there should be

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Thank you

I love this story, are you going to be doing a sequel this year?

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