... but do not "dispense with" quotes. A little effort on your part to add them (and to go to a new paragraph for each speaker) would make your story SO MUCH easier to read.
5 stars nonetheless.
Was really good!
guess us married fellas would luv to find a friend with extras...though...not sure I'd get as turned on with the Suck it bitch. either way....I like where this is leading
@ mumblegoose-thanks for comments
@kilppert- I regretted the "suck it bitch" as soon as I submitted
I was begining to think I was the only old fart "62" that loved nipple play.
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