by Emma1994UK
There is much to like in this story. When 'anything goes' on the Internet, it is a pleasure to read something that is erotic while remaining restrained, and so your writing stands out. I also like the subject - the Greek myths remain curiously neglected in stories. I also applaud the aim at a literary quality rather than the all to often seen lowest common denominator crudity. Altogether, I very much enjoyed it, and if I had to offer a criticism it would be the jarring Americanisms. That aside, thank you for the delicious, delightful, delicate naughtiness.